Esther Sylvester

Thank you so much, you two. You've really helped me progress as a writer! I'll fix this errors and consider the suggestions as soon as I can.

Thank you very much guys! I will work on these issues when I can.

Thank you KD! I can always rely on you for a truthful review. I'll work on it immediately! More reviews are welcome and needed! Esther Sylvester

Thank you! That means a lot!

Cool, thanks guys! I've went through and revised most of it and I must say it looks a lot better thanks to you. And to KD, I say darn it ...

My pleasure.

Thank you for the constructive criticism. I'm glad you all liked it to some extent! Thank you for pointing out those mistakes. I probably wouldn't have dealt with them on ...